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Senia Bikini

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So I decided to divert from my list that I recently made and draw this.

I wanted to draw a bikini drawing for a while, so her it is. Senia in her bikini. I really want to go all out for this photo. You know, color and background. And maybe a digital rendering of it if I can do that.

Oh yeah, and she's standing in the ocean.

Tell me what you think. Respect my art, constructive criticism only please.
Image size
1259x1774px 466.01 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot SX110 IS
Shutter Speed
1/8 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
May 4, 2008, 3:41:14 AM
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I like the general pose and the suggestion of a flirt/tease.

Ok you mentioned this was old work and compared with your later works [ which improves a lot ] so I shall try be a humble as I can be.

Head anatomy is looking ok, with the only flaw being the left eye as other friends have mentioned. Have her blink in a mildly curved U would be more aligned if its placed a little tad lower. Neck seems alright although I still get the feeling it looks thicker.

Body anatomy is probably the overall " need to improve " part. Shoulders can be a little more rounded, and the hands can be a little bigger don't worry. With the breasts part being well endowed and the hip less rounded I can imagine her tipping off balance.

The genital lines and lower piece of the bikini seems to be given me an image that she's woman on top and man at bottom. Perhaps if we lose that bracket-shaped looking genital lines and give the bikini piece a more curved like a U-shape, now that would make her look sexy in her own ways. But not too oval U shape because it might made her look more like a guy. A little mild curve on her outer left leg should also do the trick.